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Apple tree in autumn fall photo idea.

- Haiku X 137 - Autumn Apples -

get ready to play
leaves and apples on the ground
shades of henna falls

by heavenly heights
color glow in the sunshine
embrace you naked

like small angel wings
they fall eager and ready
treated by the storm















13.10.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Raven Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, Autumn sings within the wonder of your tasty write. Wonderful Haiku as I know to expect from you. I feel hungry. Time to eat. Excellent Haiku Anne-Lise. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 5:19 AM
- Many thanks for visit, comment and a fave, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Three great ku full of imagery.. now they sound like tasty apples..
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 5:19 AM
- Many thanks S.O., for visit & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:42 PM
such a yummy poem as the leaves and apples fall the tree becomes naked :)
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:10 PM
- Many thanks for visit & comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
B. Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 7:07 PM
A crispy and beautiful haiku, my friend.. amazing imagery! fantastic picture! autumn is my favorite time of year.. Many blessings!!
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:09 PM
- Thank you very much, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 4:38 PM
it's harvest time and your pretty poem is lush as apples, anne... grreat job!...happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:09 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Very nice. I like to make apple crisp this time of year. :)
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 3:07 PM
5 lbs Apples - 2 cups Quick oats - 1 cup flour - 2 cups Brown sugar - 1/4 cup of white sugar - 4 teaspoon cinnamon - 1/4 teaspoon Nutmeg, ground - 1/2 teaspoon salt - 1 cup butter - .............. Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 13, 2018 at 2:28 PM
gorgeous autumnal imagery Anne-Lise. I've been given a bag of cooking apples I must make an apple crumble for the man who gave them to me, he lost his wife a few years ago and loves it when someone makes a special treat for him:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:52 PM
- Yes, do it for him ... then he will be happy :) - I have eaten freshly baked apple cake with cream today .... mmmmm .... gorgeous :) - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Colorful autumn in your poems..well done, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:02 PM
- Many thanks for encouraging comment as always, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Lovely hakiu Sunshine about my favourite fruit. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:00 PM
- I have picked apples on the ground today ... good and juicy :) - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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