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Amazing Cinemagraphs by Jamie Beck and Kevin Burg

- Haiku X 128 - Tomato -

seed of tomatoes
                             counting rain and sunny days
                                earth ~  wind and red fire




















15.04 - 2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Haiku no titles, theme NATURE - Poetry Contest
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3rd place in the contest
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Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Particularly love your last line, Sunshine. Well penned.
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 12:27 PM
- Many thanks Line, I appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Like it...Lick it...Love it!! :) gw
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:35 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:48 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:56 PM
This haiku is red hot Anne-Lise. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 2:27 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:27 AM
This is wonderful, I love it Anne-Lise! I snapped a picture of a wee tomato plant growing out of the crack between a building and the sidewalk on a bleak north face city street, the marvel! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:26 PM
- I have planted many tomatoes and grapes ... exciting to see them grow, Maureen :) - Many thanks for visit and your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:23 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Excellent Haiku Anne-Lise, congratulations on your placement on this juicy number.....Maria xxx
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:22 PM
- Many thanks Maria, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Congrats, Sunshine-- dug the red fire, tomatoes imagery
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:21 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Good haiku, Anne-Lise! CONGRATS. Janice
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:21 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win, Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:19 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations Sunshine. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:18 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:54 AM
WOW! Perfect example of what at Haiku should be.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 4:04 AM
- Elaine, many thanks I appreciate your friendly visit and your WOW :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:06 AM
I really like the feeling this one gives, Sunshine!!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:54 AM
- Many thanks, I appreciate your friendly visit Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Excellent haiku, Anne-Lise! Loved it. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:53 AM
- Laura, many thanks I appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 10:56 PM
You make love out of pain, loved this!!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:52 AM
- Many thanks, I appreciate your friendly visit Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Lovely Haiku Anne-Lise, tomatoes natures finest, well written, good luck in contest. :))
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:50 AM
- Many thanks Roy, I appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Delightful poem and delicious looking picture
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:57 PM
- Many thanks Tim, I appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:18 AM
Soon grow a tomato wonderland...Do you like tomatoes...All the best Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:35 AM
- Yes, I love tomatoes Arturo :) - Eat it like snacks almost every day :) - Many thanks, appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:25 AM
That's so delicious,Anne... Great imagery...
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:36 AM
- Many thanks, appreciate your friendly visit Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:44 AM
Excellent. A poetically very tasty and delicious Haiku my friend. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:43 AM
- Many thanks Ravi, appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Knight Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Wow! such a yummy and delicious haiku, Anne-Lise /// good luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:37 AM
- Many thanks, appreciate your friendly visit Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 5:33 PM
yummy poem, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest...
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:36 AM
- Many thanks Ilene, appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Love em, with a bit of salt. Lovely hakiu Sunshine, good luck. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:36 AM
- Many thanks, appreciate your friendly visit Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 4:37 PM
how picturesque in red shade, anne!...looks juicy too... happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:35 AM
- Many thanks Nette, appreciate your friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Al the ingredients for a successful harvest..from seeds to tomatoes..well written, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:35 AM
- Many thanks, appreciate your friendly visit Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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