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Elemental in water form, taking on a human shape.

- Haiku X 123 - Water -

Small drops ... mouth running
                            molecules in the bottle
                          Moan of blood and sweat










07.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Silent One

March 8, 2018 at 8:02 AM

Oooh this is a deeeeep haiku...

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 8:15 AM

- Deep like the ocean, S.O. - Many thanks for comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

March 7, 2018 at 11:21 PM

What a wonderful wet Haiku Anne-Lise, water is something we yearn for, well written my friend, take care........Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:12 AM

- We can not survive without water :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 7, 2018 at 9:26 PM

An emotive haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:10 AM

- Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

March 7, 2018 at 8:54 PM

A wonderful Haiku Anne-Lise, and the image enhances, without taking away anything the words portray. Good luck in the contest....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:13 AM

- Maria, many thanks for lovely comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

March 7, 2018 at 6:03 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, This is a brilliantly-done Haiku!! Each word in each verse has its place, and forms a perfect word picture which is further enhanced by the photo image (above) of rising hand of water. A superb setting for sure!! A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:28 AM

- Many thanks for a great and meaningful comment, Gary - And special thanks for your "fav" - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2018 at 3:21 PM

ahhh, great depiction of a great thirst!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:10 AM

- Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

March 7, 2018 at 2:32 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, what a great Haiku you have penned, my very talented friend! This is a winner for sure! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2018 at 3:09 AM

- Appreciate your lovely comment :) - Many thanks, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 7, 2018 at 12:27 PM

Superb beauty and truth in your Haiku dearest Anne-Lise! Love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2018 at 12:31 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

March 7, 2018 at 8:08 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, another golden gem from your pen. Wishing you well in the contest. Your Haiku always sing. Every Haiku you write is truly special. This one joins the rest of my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2018 at 11:34 AM

- I usually have no luck in contest Mike, but your "fav" means more to me :) - Many thanks for lovely comment - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)