Haiku- Washed Away

sand washed by night's shifting tide -two re-drawn hearts
Contemporary Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Love it!
Williams Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Beautiful Haiku. I have a love story with Japan and the people. I try to go there every year, and now with my sweet daughter-in laws help am writing Haiku.
Callus Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 2:17 AM
I would like to think that those drawings are just covered over and not deleted....what we draw in the sand is usually what we imprint in the heart. Full marks for a beautiful short poem. Regards // paul
Vinson Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Blood richened by reading. : )
Leiser Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Great twist at the end...loved it :)
Manassian Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Yes, they need to be re-drawn...nothing can destroy true love. Hugs, dear
Godwin Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 5:28 PM
A lot of impact in those few syllables, I admire this one, Charmaine! All the best ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 5:22 PM
A beautiful picture you paint Charma...lovely haiku
Green Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 5:21 PM
This is beautiful and a little sad my sweet friend. But, the tide always comes back in again. I really loved this poem.
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 5:20 PM
aww this is so lovely Charma:-) hugs Jan xx
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