Haiku Vs Senryu

Impetus of spring
   Beget invigorate life --
       Fruition with hope.



Shrill winds rip, tear, cry
   Heated verse under the sheets,
The songs of love grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 27, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Amy, it is true about Linda-Marie... I still cry for her. I know how you are feeling, when I found out, I curled up in a fetal position, and cried. I could not believe it, in a way, I still can't. All I wanted was to be left alone. Cause this is a lady and a friend, who taught me how to be strong on this site, overcome the ugliness others will bestow upon me. You know Linda-Marie's the bravest poet I've ever met. I miss her dearly.. I feel, your sadness,... She was definitely fond of us and you know it... I will forever Love my BFF.. (Her spirit and smile will remain in the soup forever). Hugs to you Amy..... luv PD
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 5:47 PM
Very nice, Amy. wow,that second one is hot!!
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May 24, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Amazing Amy so wonderful to see you back here again. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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May 24, 2012 at 9:47 AM
Beautiful haiku Amy, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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