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Haiku VS Senryu

Impetus of spring Beget invigorate life -- Fruition with hope. Shrill winds rip, tear, cry Heated verse under the sheets, The songs of love grow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 4/27/2014 12:24:00 PM
Amy, it is true about Linda-Marie... I still cry for her. I know how you are feeling, when I found out, I curled up in a fetal position, and cried. I could not believe it, in a way, I still can't. All I wanted was to be left alone. Cause this is a lady and a friend, who taught me how to be strong on this site, overcome the ugliness others will bestow upon me. You know Linda-Marie's the bravest poet I've ever met. I miss her dearly.. I feel, your sadness,... She was definitely fond of us and you know it... I will forever Love my BFF.. (Her spirit and smile will remain in the soup forever). Hugs to you Amy..... luv PD
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Date: 5/26/2012 5:47:00 PM
Very nice, Amy. wow,that second one is hot!!
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:06:00 AM
Amazing Amy so wonderful to see you back here again. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Amy, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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