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Haiku: Traditional 49

sparrow's song floating
cloud burst drowns our connection
lips too lose their purse

Brian Johnston
April 27, 2016

Inspired by Caroline Cecile on FaceBook's Japanese Poetry Garden Path.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/28/2016 9:28:00 AM
Love sparrows love this haiku.
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