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Haiku: Traditional 47

clouds eclipse the sun my shadow plays hide and seek on daisy filled dell Brian Johnston April 27, 2016

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Date: 4/23/2016 8:23:00 AM
Wow ! Brian this is one of the best haikus I've read here in the soup. Perfection. Wonderful imagery.
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