Haiku: Traditional 34
fall rain soaks rock flaws
early winter brings hard freeze
boulder’s heart exposed
Brian Johnston
April 9, 2016
Inspired by Pat Geyer in FaceBook's "Japanese Poetry Garden Path"
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