Haiku: Traditional 33
grey day's antidote
cold beer muted telly ad
rain sound on the roof
Brian Johnston
April 8, 2016
Poet’s Note:
Inspired by Erasmus Bock on Facebook's Japanese Poetry Garden Path
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