Haiku: Traditional 31

what truly binds us -
a million points of light flow, 
breathless milky way

Brian Johnston
April 3,2016
Inspired by Josie Hibbing on Face Book's 'Japanese Poetry Garden Path.'
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A. Sharma Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Lovely Brian..
Nance Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Oh I like that "breathless milky way" nicely said.
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Wonderful haiku Brian, good work...
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:45 PM
beautiful! :-) hugs Jan xx
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