Haiku: Traditional 30

freshly prepped garden -
affection I left behind
crumbling embers

Brian Johnston
April 2,2016

Poet's Notes: 
Inspired by Erasmus Bock on FaceBook's Japanese Poetry Garden Path
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:23 PM
You do better than most at writing in this simple yet difficult form!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace