Haiku: Traditional 27

quail flush from thicket
lined freezing clansmen shooting
many birds die twice

Brian Johnston
March 27, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Excellent imagery here
Gazbowski Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Clever and witty, thought provoking too. This goes deeper.
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