Haiku: Traditional 27

quail flush from thicket
lined freezing clansmen shooting
many birds die twice

Brian Johnston
March 27, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/27/2016 9:09:00 PM
Excellent imagery here
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Date: 3/27/2016 12:54:00 PM
Clever and witty, thought provoking too. This goes deeper.
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