Haiku: Traditional 11

Still here by lake shore
Seagulls knife air, sailers tack, 
No traffic lights flash

Brian Johnston
October 3, 2015

Variation on Haiku: Traditional 11

Still here by lake shore
Gulls knife languid surfer air, 
No warning lights flash

Brian Johnston
October 17, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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