Haiku Today November 28

creeping of the flesh
                                         fondling in an old back seat
                                               spooky cab rattles










                         haiku today november 28 ©  rajat kanti chakrabarty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 1, 2014 at 9:45 PM
If the car's a'rocking don't come a'knocking - as they say. I believe your intention was to be sensual, but to me it was just funny. Good humor. Though the fact it's a "spooky" cab makes me wonder if the two people in it don't even own it.
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December 2, 2014 at 3:15 AM
Tim you always have a good interpretation at hand. Lovely. Great Tim. Take care XXXX rajat
Meade Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:23 AM
rockin and rollin in the spooky seat . . . yes, yes, this is very good workout
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November 28, 2014 at 11:23 PM
rockin and rollin of spooks. They are ubiquitous.Love DavidXXX rajat
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November 28, 2014 at 3:03 AM
- Good one, Rajat :) - I wish you a lovely weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 28, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Lovely weekend to you too. Love. XXXX rajat
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November 28, 2014 at 2:52 AM
Well done Rajat! Enjoyed it. A 7 for you! Have a great day my dear friend! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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November 28, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Hi sweet Dorian. Wish you great weekend. Love XXX rajat
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