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haiku today november 28

creeping of the flesh fondling in an old back seat spooky cab rattles haiku today november 28 © rajat kanti chakrabarty

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Date: 12/1/2014 9:45:00 PM
If the car's a'rocking don't come a'knocking - as they say. I believe your intention was to be sensual, but to me it was just funny. Good humor. Though the fact it's a "spooky" cab makes me wonder if the two people in it don't even own it.
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RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
Date: 12/2/2014 3:15:00 AM
Tim you always have a good interpretation at hand. Lovely. Great Tim. Take care XXXX rajat
Date: 11/28/2014 10:23:00 AM
rockin and rollin in the spooky seat . . . yes, yes, this is very good workout
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:23:00 PM
rockin and rollin of spooks. They are ubiquitous.Love DavidXXX rajat
Date: 11/28/2014 3:03:00 AM
- Good one, Rajat :) - I wish you a lovely weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
Date: 11/28/2014 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Lovely weekend to you too. Love. XXXX rajat
Date: 11/28/2014 2:52:00 AM
Well done Rajat! Enjoyed it. A 7 for you! Have a great day my dear friend! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:24:00 AM
Hi sweet Dorian. Wish you great weekend. Love XXX rajat