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Haiku- Thunder

Haiku: Thunder


dark clouds rumble on
echos of flashing lights strike
thunder’s wrath revealed.


by Zyrool

weatherhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

July 13, 2024 at 3:34 PM

Hello Zyrool, thunder is loud. it makes people jump when the air is to quiet. thunder is always followed by lightening. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 14, 2024 at 10:28 AM

Hello Zyrool, You are welcome. Oh! What were you hiding from as a child? Wishing you a blessed Sunday and a awesome week ahead. m y friend. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

July 14, 2024 at 12:18 AM

Hi Darlene, thank you for the read. Greatly appreciated. As a child I used to run and ride under the bed. Wishing you a beautifully Blessed Sunday and an awesome week ahead, my friend.

Richard Evans

May 9, 2024 at 9:07 PM

I find it interesting how you created movement with just a few words. Well done my friend...........peace!

Zyrool Gifford

May 9, 2024 at 11:26 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, much appreciated my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Bill Baker

March 30, 2024 at 3:44 PM

Powerful Haiku, Zyrool. I'm back to catch up on your poetry. Bill

Zyrool Gifford

March 31, 2024 at 6:53 AM

Hi Pal, thank you for your support. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.

Gershon Wolf

March 28, 2024 at 7:55 PM

'thunder's wrath' really nails it. Great haiku, Zyrool --- and welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Gershon

Zyrool Gifford

March 31, 2024 at 6:49 AM

Hi Gershon, thanks for the welcome it feels good to be among so many friendly people. Glad you like my little poem. Have an enjoyable weekend, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

March 27, 2024 at 1:39 PM

An active participating haiku that I love very much, thanks for sharing.

Zyrool Gifford

March 27, 2024 at 1:53 PM

Hello Rose, thank you for your kind words they mean a lot. Glad you like it.

Hilda Greenhough

March 22, 2024 at 9:34 PM

I enjoyed very much this classic haiku. It mentions the wrath of thunder which is how I experience these events.

Zyrool Gifford

March 23, 2024 at 5:26 AM

Hello Hilda, happy weekend to you my friend. Glad you like it. As a child I was scared of the sound of thunder and still is. Thank you for your feedback.

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