Haiku (Sweet Dreams)

summer slumbers deep as winter breathes icy tales sugar-frosted dreams
*** for Rick Parise's 'Haiku You' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 11:44 AM
So much said with so few words. That's the magic with Haiku poetry >> James
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June 4, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Very creative Haiku that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I received HM in a contest...Sara
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June 1, 2010 at 7:39 PM
mmm sugar frosted dreams--I just love that!! it definitely ended this perfect haiku! I'm sure this will be a winner, Sharon :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Wow, this one is awesome!! Luv, andrea
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June 1, 2010 at 11:57 AM
nice and sweet on the dreams, the image is caught with the sweetest view of nature. Have a nice one, Sidney Lee AnnM.
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June 1, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Great write..I agree , I feel it too...Michael
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June 1, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Wow- I can FEEL this one. Great job!
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