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Haiku Sunrise

from my boat I saw... golden rays of early light striate the heavens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Congrats Margaret on a wonderful win for this Haiku of creative perfection luv..
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Nicely said Margaret. Congratulations on your win
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, margaret
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November 18, 2011 at 2:29 AM
MARGARET, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
Macmillan Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Striate! Fabulous word choice. Like this one very much, and I'm certain PD will, too!
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November 15, 2011 at 6:58 PM
oooh, I love that line "striate the heavens" Luscious, Marg!
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Hi Margaret. I don't know how to comment on Haiku so I wanted to say that I was here and enjoyed your poem. Tony
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