Haiku Sunrise

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from my boat I saw... golden rays of early light striate the heavens

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 3:51:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on a wonderful win for this Haiku of creative perfection luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:32:00 AM

Nicely said Margaret. Congratulations on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, margaret

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:29:00 AM

MARGARET, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/15/2011 9:00:00 PM

Striate! Fabulous word choice. Like this one very much, and I'm certain PD will, too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2011 6:58:00 PM

oooh, I love that line "striate the heavens" Luscious, Marg!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/15/2011 6:31:00 PM

Hi Margaret. I don't know how to comment on Haiku so I wanted to say that I was here and enjoyed your poem. Tony