Premiere Contest WinnerHaiku - Sunflower

blooming and bobbing
  flower power head turner~
      feasting goldfinches


I passed a dancing sunflower on my walk today,
out sprang a goldfinch. 

8/3/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Zahid Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on potd
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations, Mo, on POTD!
Proxenos Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 9:55 AM
My Fave. flower, glad to see you get POTD for this glorious, fantastic description - a gold flinch, what a perfect way to end your write. Well penned my friend, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:28 PM
Once again, a dandy image of one of my favorite flowers, and congrats on POTD, my dear friend. Here's to you! Bravo, Gershon
Doll Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:12 PM
Masterful haiku. Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 4:17 PM
POTW and now POTD! I loved this gem. Congratulations on POTD honors. Blessings xxoo
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Beautiful verse, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Watt Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Algorithm or no algorithm, enjoy the attention the honor affords you, for you are indeed a wonderful poetess with a lovely eye for nature, sharp insight into humanity and a breathtaking command of poetic language. I applaud and congratulate you (and your amazing goldfinches)! Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Wow !! Your haiku is shining brightly. Congratulations Maureen, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Back again with double congrats, Maureen, on POTW and POTD.
One Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on POTD.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. So cute. I love sunflowers. Enjoy your win and day.....................
Michael Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:53 AM
The goldfinch probably wanted to say hello to you...Nice imagery...Congratulations Maureen on POTD...Well done
Mcgee Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Congrats on this golden POTD. "D
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thank you Jeanne! I think the algorithm broked ;), xomo
Koplin Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 4:42 AM
back with congrats on POTD!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:08 AM
(whaaaat?) Thank you Mark, xomo!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 4:30 AM
potw now potd! I think the algorithm needs a re boot as I am seeing so many names duplicated myself included but never seen a poem awarded both honours! that said it is a beautiful poem:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:35 AM
the algorithm certainly has played up since the site crashed lol , many congrats again Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:03 AM
Somebody broke the algorithm! I hope it wasn’t my fat poem. I will practice my Canadiana, “sorry, thank you”... ;), mo hugs!
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 1:03 AM
Back with more congrats Maureen on POTD. Tom
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:37 AM
yeah i am seeing so many names with repeat honours - I have had POTD twice recently i wish they would get it sorted as some never get the honour
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Don't worry Maureen, I got POTD twice in a week, there's definitely something amiss.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:06 AM
As I said to Jan, “sorry thank you!” I may have broken the algorithm, I break things ;), xomo
Kitchin Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTW! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Tania, xomo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 6:34 AM
I love this Mo. A wonderful choice for POTW. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Lovely! Extra hugs your way ~x
Shaw Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 6:05 PM
A gold cup, such a well-deserved one too too, hold on, while I get my straw . . . ; )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:09 AM
You are awesome. Juicy too. xomo
La France Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Pigeon,congratulations on Poem of the Week with this beauty _Constance
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Constance. Warm hugs, xomo
Nicole Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations Maureen, on Poem of the Week. Such a beautiful image you have painted here. I am smiling. :) Brandy
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:07 AM
Thank you Brandy! The goldfinches never fail to make me smile ;), xomo
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Lovely! Congrats Maureen on poem of the week.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Vijay! Warm hugs, xomo!
Watt Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 12:06 PM
So much gold! Glad to see this gem win the gold medals of haiku #1, and now POTW for you, Mo! Enjoy the well-deserved honor all week, Pidge! XO Hugs ~ John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:06 AM
I owe it to the finches ;), Thank you my friend! xomo
Mishra Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 7:27 AM
And a POTW! They're blooming and soaring :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Thank you Aditi! One for the finches! xomo ;),
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