Haiku Spray

fast plunging gannets
churning the sea white with spray -
mothers floury hands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sathasivam Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Excellent. Well done. Enjoyed. Tfs
Newman Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Thanks for you time and comment,glad you enjoyed it.
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December 13, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Thank you for the time and comment.glad you enjoyed it. Miken
Gorelick Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Beautifully done...For once a real haiku..BG
Newman Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:24 AM
Thank you for your time and comment, that is really encouraging. miken
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 12:54 PM
such a descriptive write - brilliant imagery! Hugs jan xxx
Newman Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Thank you Jan, your support is very helpful
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