Haiku Sonnet

Haiku Sonnet.

end of summer night
in dark coolness lunar night
shows up many stars
a summer night breeze
so calm cool no sound at all 
whisper of wind sound
red bright in the south 
calm shining nice glistening
lovely awesome star
eye-catching blue star
amazing shines beamy lights
in the west pure sky

Language of reality 
Last for so many light years.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Parker Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Clever piece AND POTW, wow! :o))
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Calasibetta Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Beautiful imagery! Congratulations on POTW! You paint a majestic picture of a night sky. Paulette
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 4:57 PM
Beautiful of you too!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 6:12 AM
red bright in the south… eye-catching blue star…congrats on POTW, Abdullah!
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Thank you friendly Kim!
Rodgers Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 5:26 AM
Hello Abdullah, A big congratulations on POTW. I love looking and contemplating the night sky and you have inked it so well! - Blessings, My Dear friend, Daniel
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Hello dear Sir :-) Thank you very much! Have a wonderful time :-)
Jones Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 12:56 AM
What a lovely potw it brings about a quiet peace! Congratulations on your honor!
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Thank you friendly Karen!
Nicole Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Being that I'm a lady from the South, this image holds me close. ' whisper of wind sound, red bright in the south. ' So magical, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Nicole Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 6:56 PM
So cute. Yes, it does sound like a lovely poetic phrase. My heart is smiling. :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you lovely lady Brandy! (sound like a poetic phrase, lovely lady Brandy). Glad to read your nice comment. Have a wonderful time :-) Hugs, AA
Nicole Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 5:54 PM
Yes, indeed. :)
Bartley Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your POTW.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:07 PM
You are welcome, thanks!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win........................
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Thank you wonderful Paula!
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September 8, 2024 at 4:48 AM
An excellent Haiku Sonnet Abdullah, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Thank you lovely Beryl!
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Abdullah, a creative poem, congratulations on POTW.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:10 PM
Thank you lovely poetess Tania!
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Nothing beats looking at the night sky on a clear night Abdullah, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Agreed! Thank you dear Mr. Cunningham Tom. I think many of Cunningham family are poets. Have a nice day ~ AA
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 1:40 AM
This is absolutely magical and left me in awe of how youv painted imagery throughout. How beautiful! One of my faves from you dear abdullah! Thank you for sharing such a lunar glazed poem!
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Pleasure is reading you :-) So beautiful of you too lovely Ink. Thank you very much! Have a nice day~ AA
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 4:29 AM
I love this! So beautiful. A Fave for me :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Thank you sweet lovely Heidi :-) Have a nice lovely day! ~ AA
Hind Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 6:16 PM
A haiku sonnet! That's interesting-
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:19 PM
Thank you sweet friendly Paige! Have a nice day ~ AA
Jones Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 6:11 PM
Love the imagery!
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Thank you so much dear lovely Karen :-)
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