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Haiku Sonnet

Haiku Sonnet.

end of summer night
in dark coolness lunar night
shows up many stars
a summer night breeze
so calm cool no sound at all 
whisper of wind sound
red bright in the south 
calm shining nice glistening
lovely awesome star
eye-catching blue star
amazing shines beamy lights
in the west pure sky

Language of reality 
Last for so many light years.

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Arlo Parker

Date: 9/9/2024 2:37:00 PM

Clever piece AND POTW, wow! :o))

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 4:56:00 PM

Thank you very much :-)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/9/2024 10:10:00 AM

Beautiful imagery! Congratulations on POTW! You paint a majestic picture of a night sky. Paulette

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 4:57:00 PM

Beautiful of you too!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2024 6:12:00 AM

red bright in the south… eye-catching blue star…congrats on POTW, Abdullah!

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thank you friendly Kim!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/9/2024 5:26:00 AM

Hello Abdullah, A big congratulations on POTW. I love looking and contemplating the night sky and you have inked it so well! - Blessings, My Dear friend, Daniel

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:00:00 PM

Hello dear Sir :-) Thank you very much! Have a wonderful time :-)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/9/2024 12:56:00 AM

What a lovely potw it brings about a quiet peace! Congratulations on your honor!

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:01:00 PM

Thank you friendly Karen!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/8/2024 4:08:00 PM

Being that I'm a lady from the South, this image holds me close. ' whisper of wind sound, red bright in the south. ' So magical, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2024 6:56:00 PM

So cute. Yes, it does sound like a lovely poetic phrase. My heart is smiling. :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:06:00 PM

Thank you lovely lady Brandy! (sound like a poetic phrase, lovely lady Brandy). Glad to read your nice comment. Have a wonderful time :-) Hugs, AA

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/9/2024 5:54:00 PM

Yes, indeed. :)

Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 5:39:00 PM

Southern gal?

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 9/8/2024 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your POTW.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:07:00 PM

You are welcome, thanks!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/8/2024 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win........................

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:08:00 PM

Thank you wonderful Paula!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/8/2024 4:48:00 AM

An excellent Haiku Sonnet Abdullah, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:09:00 PM

Thank you lovely Beryl!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/8/2024 4:37:00 AM

Abdullah, a creative poem, congratulations on POTW.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:10:00 PM

Thank you lovely poetess Tania!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2024 4:35:00 AM

Nothing beats looking at the night sky on a clear night Abdullah, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:12:00 PM

Agreed! Thank you dear Mr. Cunningham Tom. I think many of Cunningham family are poets. Have a nice day ~ AA

Ink Empress

Date: 9/4/2024 1:40:00 AM

This is absolutely magical and left me in awe of how youv painted imagery throughout. How beautiful! One of my faves from you dear abdullah! Thank you for sharing such a lunar glazed poem!

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/10/2024 5:17:00 PM

Pleasure is reading you :-) So beautiful of you too lovely Ink. Thank you very much! Have a nice day~ AA