Haiku Season

The pattering rain
bliss to the mutual barter
pit-a-pat is gone









For: Catie Lindsey's "In The Mood" Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Nice image there. That's a unique expression for me read. Cheers!
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Bravo - well done haiku A.O. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Simple thought, beautiful words :) just stopped by to say hello :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Sharma Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 10:56 PM
amazing
Konos Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 8:34 PM
WOW....terrific....thanks
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