Haiku - Sea

the blue ship
about to put to sea 
my heart leaps up


05.09.18

2nd place
"Sea / Ocean"
hosted by M. Talbot
05.12.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 23, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Interesting ship for you..
Flower Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, S.O. :) It's nice to read you here.
Goff Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Expectant...color of the sea...well done, Moon!
Flower Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Thank you, James. :)
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:00 AM
For sure; be positive and ride the waves not submerged. Toss those blues overboard. Very well said.
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Hi Joe. You've pressed the right button! Thanks for dropping by. :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Oh, that is a great contrast, a ship being put down into the water as your heart leaps up. Love that. Congrats for the win.
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 12:38 AM
I love this comment of yours, Andrea. Very profound. :) Thanks!
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:07 PM
congrats on your win Moon Flower:-) hugs jan xx
Flower Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Jan. :) hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 3:04 PM
I can feel the excitement in this one! Fabulously done. Congratulations on your win! xomo :)
Flower Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Maureen. :)
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your great win, MF, the imagery is fabulous... eve
Flower Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:31 AM
- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Moon Flower :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Congrats on your win, Moon Flower. Well done.
Flower Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Thank you, Line. :)
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