Haiku Redwood

haiku ~ redwood


unfelled statuesque
accomplishing amour touch
archaic redwood

redwood, I was amazed at their shear size and extreme age 
some of these living redwood trees are over 3000 years old

august 4, 2020
traditional haiku-nature themed poetry contest
sponsor: Tania Kitchen

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Date: 8/10/2020 7:46:00 AM
Fantastic haiku. Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/10/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Mo! You rock!
Date: 8/8/2020 1:15:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win mark:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Jan! I appreciate you my friend
Date: 8/8/2020 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. It is hard to believe that there are living redwood trees that are over 3000 years. Now that is old. Enjoy your win and weekend................
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 5:40:00 PM
I think they have one that is 3600
Date: 8/8/2020 9:58:00 AM
great imagery for these wondrous trees, MArk. they are ancient and so awesome. Congrats on your win.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 8/8/2020 8:03:00 AM
I love the majestic redwoods of Nothern California, your verse here is impressive, congratulations on your win, Mark.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate that
Date: 8/8/2020 6:41:00 AM
Loved the picture you've painted for redwood Mark. Tender, mysterious, gorgeous. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/8/2020 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Mark. I love your haiku about Redwood - I think I saw them in California and was mesmerized!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 6:09:00 AM
Thank you! They are incredible
Date: 8/7/2020 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful Mark! So glad you entered this gem. I love the fact that redwoods grow in a circle to support each other with their shallow root systems. Congratulations. Creative imagery!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Sam I appreciate that. They are also hollow and grow up to 360 feet tall
Date: 8/7/2020 9:13:00 AM
I've seen these redwoods, Mark, and you described them very creatively. Congratulations on your win!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, they are breath taking aren't they
Date: 8/7/2020 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on writing a winning Haiku, Mark.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 8:52:00 AM
I didn't think it would place but I'm glad it did. Thanks Jenna
Date: 8/7/2020 4:21:00 AM
Mark, congratulations on your winning placement, love the magnificent imagery!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania! I greatly appreciate the placement. Thanks my friend.
Date: 8/5/2020 3:18:00 PM
what wonderful visual Mark i would love to see one for real:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/5/2020 6:40:00 PM
These trees get up to 360 feet tall. When you stand on the ground next to them and look up its truly amazing. I dove through the avenue of giants in northern california
Date: 8/5/2020 9:48:00 AM
Awesome write I can visualize those amazing archaic redwood trees over 3000 years old - think of the history they could reveal to us. Loved this and faved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/5/2020 6:38:00 PM
I actually have a piece of one in my garage that is older than Jesus
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