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Haiku Portrait

Short hair and brown eyes A daily welcoming smile A haiku portrait

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/11/2009 6:13:00 AM

Between the canvas and the pen, I come back to your pen again and again ... it paints without flaw

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:58:00 PM

A Haiku of you Abe, clever write>>James

Date: 5/2/2009 11:57:00 AM

You've got me smiling with this one. Enjoyed it. Thank you for choosing my poem as one of the winners in your haiku contest. I appreciate the opportunity. Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 8:41:00 AM

Mystery lady, known to your heart alone, bravo for you.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/21/2009 1:40:00 PM

Makes me smile myself. Such a happy haiku. Beautiful. Love, Shar

James Peranteau

Date: 4/21/2009 10:34:00 AM

I'm backing you up on this one Abe,..her hand is sweating in mine,..great Haiku ! TY for the congrats....james

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/21/2009 6:50:00 AM

This was clever and unusual ...love it! :) Carrie

Anna Mayall

Date: 4/21/2009 6:01:00 AM

wow.....cool

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/21/2009 1:49:00 AM

I like this concept, I think maybe it could have been developed into a clearer image still by making a chain of Haikus. Still stands alone beautifully too! Thanks for your kind comments on my 'Serenade', kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/20/2009 10:44:00 PM

Nice descriptions, your muse must have been smiling at you...Raul