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Haiku Portrait


Short hair and brown eyes
A daily welcoming smile
A haiku portrait

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L'Nass Shango

December 11, 2009 at 6:13 AM

Between the canvas and the pen, I come back to your pen again and again ... it paints without flaw

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 12:58 PM

A Haiku of you Abe, clever write>>James

May 2, 2009 at 11:57 AM

You've got me smiling with this one. Enjoyed it. Thank you for choosing my poem as one of the winners in your haiku contest. I appreciate the opportunity. Karen

L'Nass Shango

April 22, 2009 at 8:41 AM

Mystery lady, known to your heart alone, bravo for you.

Sharon Winter

April 21, 2009 at 1:40 PM

Makes me smile myself. Such a happy haiku. Beautiful. Love, Shar

James Peranteau

April 21, 2009 at 10:34 AM

I'm backing you up on this one Abe,..her hand is sweating in mine,..great Haiku ! TY for the congrats....james

Carrie Richards

April 21, 2009 at 6:50 AM

This was clever and unusual ...love it! :) Carrie

Anna Mayall

April 21, 2009 at 6:01 AM

wow.....cool

Anna-Marie Docherty

April 21, 2009 at 1:49 AM

I like this concept, I think maybe it could have been developed into a clearer image still by making a chain of Haikus. Still stands alone beautifully too! Thanks for your kind comments on my 'Serenade', kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.