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Haiku Path 2

Obituary pages Check on old friends; Another bites the dust ~~~~~~~~~ Too bad So sad; Too late ~~~~~~~~~ Book of poems Cryptic TS Eliot; Madness stirs blur ~~~~~~~~~ Bamboo garden May shadows play; Butterfly lovers ~~~~~~~~~ Odd venture Quaint adventure; Fuzzy gestures ~~~~~~~~~ Hospital visit Antiseptic fragrance; Recovery sleeps ~~~~~~~~~ Old man sits Park bench conversations; Talks to himself ~~~~~~~~~ Old woman grumbles Talks to an unseen friend; Not quite alone ~~~~~~~~~~ TV mini-series Couch potato addiction; Reel-life feels good ~~~~~~~~~ Words on rice paper Not much today; Haiku path trip ~~~~~~~~~ Sorrow speaks Joy listens; Different views ~~~~~~~~~ My dearest sighs Detects dessert; Stressed reversed ~~~~~~~~~ Word outburst Too much to follow; Ignorance sleeps ~~~~~~~~~ Word for word Messy business; Vacant strains ~~~~~~~~~ Lots to do Go to sleep; Bedtime stories ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 11 May 2015 Singapore

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Date: 5/17/2015 10:09:00 AM
Ending it with a sweet surrender. Forever *SKAT*
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/17/2015 7:18:00 PM
Dear Skat: Thank you. Leon
Date: 5/12/2015 3:58:00 AM
Good day Leon! What a lovely string of haiku you have put on offering! All are very good, but the two about the old man and woman have an extra touching feel. Hope you are keeping well! // paul
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/13/2015 12:38:00 AM
Dear Paul: Thank you. Glad these haiku fragments delighted you my friend. Good to hear your comments. Leon

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