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Haiku One

radiating sun
across clear tranquil blue skies
tree buds' petals warmth

hopping frogs capture
the first of blood sucking louse
plums dropwart blossoms

lips grin at the sound
from a rumbling waterfall
raw freshness afloats

skirting the valley
sprawls a field of wildflowers
butterflies sweet bed


(C) olive eloisa
10:25 pm
May 15,2014

Contest Name:	Spring into haiku 
Sponsor:	Debbie Guzzi
2nd Place, Praise GOd! :)

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/16/2014 9:02:00 PM Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2014 3:52:00 AM thanks much Sir.. :D

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/16/2014 5:12:00 PM All right! Haiku paradise ....congrats. BG Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2014 4:08:00 AM THank you BArbara.. :) GBU, olive

Paul Callus Date: 5/16/2014 1:02:00 PM Congratulations once again Olive_eloi!!:) This week you have taken winning positions by storm! Lovely haiku. 1st and 4th tie this write into a pretty bunch! // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2014 4:47:00 AM wehew.. :) Thanks much PAul, I don't expect much :) just i try and try and try.. :) anyhow i have nothing to lose.. :) GBU sweets.. :D

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/16/2014 10:56:00 AM Unique and creative winning work..Way to go ..Congrats ..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2014 4:44:00 AM Thanks SAra.. :) I appreciate you onwards marks.. :) GBU

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 5/16/2014 7:40:00 AM Congratulations on well deserved win! Lori Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 9:36:00 AM Thank you Lori..:) GBU

Linda Jackson Date: 5/16/2014 7:37:00 AM I loved the imagery in your poem. Congratulations. Linda x Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2014 4:45:00 AM THAnk you Lnda.. :) GBU Im pleasured of you what had written also.. :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2014 9:10:00 PM So cool to see you place high in a contest of Deb's. She is strict with her haiku. BIG congrats to you. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/16/2014 1:08:00 AM Thanks much Andrea.. :) I really have fun learning again.. :) and yes my former entry I changed it all .. :) and so this one.. :D a bracing time challenge as I dealt with this.. :D! but it paid off. :D

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/15/2014 5:13:00 PM yeah Olive [haiku 1] ok hon all but the first one are GOOD [do not submit the first one it needs work], did you enter? Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/15/2014 6:59:00 PM and i replaced with another one that appeals to the feelings..(warmth) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/15/2014 5:45:00 PM hahha yes Debbie. :) i take your suggestion.. :)thanks much..:)

Ivor Kos Date: 5/15/2014 4:43:00 PM WOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! Real powerful verse, I must say. The way you depict this is engrossing. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 9:35:00 AM Thanks much Ivo.. Really Ppreciate your drop by here..:)