Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

Haiku One

radiating sun
across clear tranquil blue skies
tree buds' petals warmth

hopping frogs capture
the first of blood sucking louse
plums dropwart blossoms

lips grin at the sound
from a rumbling waterfall
raw freshness afloats

skirting the valley
sprawls a field of wildflowers
butterflies sweet bed


(C) olive eloisa
10:25 pm
May 15,2014

Contest Name:	Spring into haiku 
Sponsor:	Debbie Guzzi
2nd Place, Praise GOd! :)

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2014 at 9:02 PM Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 3:52 AM thanks much Sir.. :D

Barbara Gorelick May 16, 2014 at 5:12 PM All right! Haiku paradise ....congrats. BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 4:08 AM THank you BArbara.. :) GBU, olive

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 1:02 PM Congratulations once again Olive_eloi!!:) This week you have taken winning positions by storm! Lovely haiku. 1st and 4th tie this write into a pretty bunch! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 4:47 AM wehew.. :) Thanks much PAul, I don't expect much :) just i try and try and try.. :) anyhow i have nothing to lose.. :) GBU sweets.. :D

Sara Kendrick May 16, 2014 at 10:56 AM Unique and creative winning work..Way to go ..Congrats ..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 4:44 AM Thanks SAra.. :) I appreciate you onwards marks.. :) GBU

Lori Lucas Mcclure May 16, 2014 at 7:40 AM Congratulations on well deserved win! Lori Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:36 AM Thank you Lori..:) GBU

Linda Jackson May 16, 2014 at 7:37 AM I loved the imagery in your poem. Congratulations. Linda x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 4:45 AM THAnk you Lnda.. :) GBU Im pleasured of you what had written also.. :D

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2014 at 9:10 PM So cool to see you place high in a contest of Deb's. She is strict with her haiku. BIG congrats to you. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 16, 2014 at 1:08 AM Thanks much Andrea.. :) I really have fun learning again.. :) and yes my former entry I changed it all .. :) and so this one.. :D a bracing time challenge as I dealt with this.. :D! but it paid off. :D

Debbie Guzzi May 15, 2014 at 5:13 PM yeah Olive [haiku 1] ok hon all but the first one are GOOD [do not submit the first one it needs work], did you enter? Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 15, 2014 at 6:59 PM and i replaced with another one that appeals to the feelings..(warmth) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 15, 2014 at 5:45 PM hahha yes Debbie. :) i take your suggestion.. :)thanks much..:)

Ivor Kos May 15, 2014 at 4:43 PM WOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! Real powerful verse, I must say. The way you depict this is engrossing. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:35 AM Thanks much Ivo.. Really Ppreciate your drop by here..:)