Haiku On Reflection

haiku on reflection

                ripples falling still
        mountain shimmers into view ~
               upside down valley

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Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2023 at 2:58 PM

Wonderful Ku. Congrats

David Kavanagh

September 1, 2023 at 6:21 AM

Thank you Andrea, yes I enjoyed inverting this one, cheers David

Arlo Parker

August 24, 2023 at 8:40 PM

Excellent!!! :o)

David Kavanagh

August 25, 2023 at 1:19 AM

Thank you Arlo, worked out well in the abstract sense, cheers David

Matt Caliri

August 24, 2023 at 8:11 PM

Superb write! Congrats on finishing 7th out of 71 entries!

David Kavanagh

August 25, 2023 at 1:20 AM

Fair play Matt, I’m delighted with your placement, thanks so much cheers David

I Am Anaya

August 1, 2023 at 6:00 PM

Ripples falling what an image! Nice. The photo is stunning, even without it, I think the imagery divine. bol

David Kavanagh

August 24, 2023 at 3:26 PM

Sorry Anaya, I’m only seeing your wonderful comment now, thank you so much, cheers David

Susan Ashley

July 29, 2023 at 9:05 PM

Dear David, a simply splendid haiku! The last line has that “wow!” factor. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh

July 30, 2023 at 1:47 AM

Heya Susan, this one seems pretty obvious, but I wonder without the photo would it be any less apparent, hopefully not! Thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David