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Haiku On Reflection

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haiku on reflection ripples falling still mountain shimmers into view ~ upside down valley

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 2:58:00 PM

Wonderful Ku. Congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/1/2023 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, yes I enjoyed inverting this one, cheers David

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/24/2023 8:40:00 PM

Excellent!!! :o)

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2023 1:19:00 AM

Thank you Arlo, worked out well in the abstract sense, cheers David

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 8:11:00 PM

Superb write! Congrats on finishing 7th out of 71 entries!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2023 1:20:00 AM

Fair play Matt, I’m delighted with your placement, thanks so much cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/1/2023 6:00:00 PM

Ripples falling what an image! Nice. The photo is stunning, even without it, I think the imagery divine. bol

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2023 3:26:00 PM

Sorry Anaya, I’m only seeing your wonderful comment now, thank you so much, cheers David

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/29/2023 9:05:00 PM

Dear David, a simply splendid haiku! The last line has that “wow!” factor. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/30/2023 1:47:00 AM

Heya Susan, this one seems pretty obvious, but I wonder without the photo would it be any less apparent, hopefully not! Thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/29/2023 9:18:00 AM

This might get boring soon David - I think this is brilliant :D

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/29/2023 10:20:00 AM

Certainly not boring for me Dilly, I enjoy the critique, so thank you very much for stopping by, cheers David

Martin Braun

Date: 7/29/2023 6:46:00 AM

Nicely done!

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/29/2023 6:48:00 AM

Thank you Martin, an inverted look at a haiku perhaps, cheers David

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/29/2023 6:35:00 AM

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