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Haiku On My Family

Second Chance May 2016 Sponsor: Eve Roper five generations connected to my grandpa kindred forefather parents united unto them came four children love to go around mother faced cancer a dear lady, my angel adulthood so strong adoring siblings warmhearted and devoted affections of blood money not vital wealthy in rich loyalty assets of true faith our childhood dog Bo my sweet Golden Retriever my canine best bud united as one roots form a family tree belovedly linked Date Written: April 30, 2016 Date Finalized:May 19, 2016

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Karam Misra

Date: 6/5/2016 10:57:00 PM

Congratulations, Laura. ~karam~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2016 10:45:00 PM

Congratulations!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 6/5/2016 10:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win....

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/5/2016 8:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/5/2016 8:40:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Lu Loo
Date: 6/6/2016 10:40:00 AM

thank you very much Eve! I am grateful for my placement! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2016 8:44:00 PM

Wonderful tale of your family tree, Laura Loo! This one is filling fast. OH MY! Never time to do everything here I want!!

Lu Loo
Date: 5/1/2016 9:01:00 PM

funny cuz' in the Hope contest I didn't even know it existed it filled up so fast! Thanks Andrea, you are a sweet lady:)-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/1/2016 1:26:00 PM

Hi Luloo, i decided again today my first write would be a Haiku and i am glad i did. Roots indeed form a family tree and they bring forth thoughts of a beautiful Haiku. This group of Haiku really sing and paint such a beautiful canvas of family. A creative write on the theme Luloo. Wishing you good luck for the contest. This is a seven and a fave. An excellent write. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lu Loo
Date: 5/1/2016 9:00:00 PM

thank you so much Mike! :)-luloo

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/1/2016 8:59:00 AM

Wow! Exactly so what i do feel, a generation is a tree like. Beautifully done in this haiku. A 7. Best of luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl

Lu Loo
Date: 5/1/2016 9:48:00 AM

thank you BL :)-luloo

Susan Palli

Date: 5/1/2016 6:06:00 AM

Well written about your wonderful family! Felt happy reading this one!

Lu Loo
Date: 5/1/2016 9:48:00 AM

thank you Susan :)-luloo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/30/2016 2:33:00 PM

Very good job. Hard to choose between our adult, chosen family and the one we were born to, so I may write about both. You wrote an excellent piece to get this contest ramped up! All the best ... CayCay

Lu Loo
Date: 4/30/2016 3:22:00 PM

thank you Cay Cay :) (email you soon:) :):):)-luloo

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 4/30/2016 1:33:00 PM

You did a great job with these Haikus....I am still thinking what to write.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/30/2016 2:24:00 PM

thank you Meenakshi :)-luloo

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/30/2016 12:36:00 PM

Laura, It touched my heart. A brilliant example of haiku. I adore this nice piece...........love from my soul.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/30/2016 1:11:00 PM

aww thank you so much Manmath..you are sweet, be blessed :)-luloo

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/30/2016 12:28:00 PM

They are very rare happy cases to know five generations upon the same roof of hope and grace. Linked by the same link of true love. It is a gift as your gift as a poet embracing your tree.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/30/2016 1:11:00 PM

thank you so much Ovidiu, be blessed :)-luloo