Haiku of Tear

Tear drops on a surface

Images form like a rush of waterfall

Into a dark blue pond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dorelien Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 3:06 PM
thank you,Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Interesting write in this one. I especially like the second line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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