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Haiku: Ocean

seagulls cry above silver ripples softly, hum best shoreline shaper by Zyrool

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/21/2025 9:00:00 AM

Lovely!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 9:15:00 AM

Thank you for the read, Kim.

P.M. Richter
Date: 5/23/2025 9:23:00 AM

The same word came to my mind as well :)

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/20/2025 6:04:00 PM

A beautiful haiku. I can almost smell the ozone.. thank you for your comments on my posts. take care.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 9:17:00 AM

Hello Margaret, thank you for the read, sorry for the delay, never got a notification. Have a wonderful weekend, fellow poet.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/17/2025 10:16:00 PM

How pretty and beautiful! Absolutely love your haiku! Especially shoreline shaper is brilliant line to end this with! Well written and delivered! Gorgeous! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/18/2025 2:12:00 PM

Thank you for your beautiful words and support Ink.means a lot. Sending Blessings your way. Have a peaceful Sunday my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/17/2025 9:17:00 PM

This poem has a real feel of the ocean. I like the sounds and hums at the shore

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/18/2025 2:14:00 PM

Thank you for the read and your lovely words,Hilda. Wishing you a Blessed Sunday my friend.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 5/16/2025 11:42:00 PM

Dear Zyrool, a beautiful Haiku, I love the cry of the seagulls and the silver ripples softly hum, a lovely contrast, have a great weekend, Danny

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/17/2025 3:22:00 AM

Hello Daniel, thank you for the visit and your lovely words. Much appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, Zyrool

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2025 11:33:00 PM

That middle line is just so beautiful

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/17/2025 3:21:00 AM

Hello Andrea thank you so much for your kind words, means so much. Wishing you a wonderful weekend my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/15/2025 9:21:00 AM

great alliteration and imagery.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/15/2025 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor, your support is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day my friend.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/15/2025 9:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor, your support is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day my friend.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 9:34:00 AM

A beautiful ocean image- enjoyed

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/14/2025 10:08:00 AM

Hello Paige, thank you for the read. So pleased you enjoyed it. Have a beautiful rest of the week, my poet friend.

Anne Winter

Date: 5/14/2025 8:05:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, your haiku transports me to the coast! I can almost hear the seagulls and feel the ocean breeze. Beautifully written! Brilliant! Best,Anne

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/14/2025 10:07:00 AM

Hello Anne, thank you for your lovely words, means a lot. Wishing you a fabulous day, fellow poet.

Valsa George

Date: 5/13/2025 12:05:00 AM

Great haiku, dear Zyrool. We can hardly think of oceans without seagulls. You have drawn a lucid, but succinct picture, here.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/13/2025 5:40:00 AM

Hello Valsa, thank you for your lovely words,much appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/12/2025 12:32:00 PM

this is lovely, zyrool!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/12/2025 1:18:00 PM

Thank you for the read and your kind words, Ilene. Wishing you a great new week ahead, my friend.