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Haiku: Ocean


seagulls cry above 
silver ripples softly, hum
best shoreline shaper






by Zyrool

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Darlene De Beaulieu

November 25, 2025 at 3:41 PM

Hello Zyrool, a beautiful poem. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 26, 2025 at 10:07 AM

Hello Zyrool, Your welcome. Thank you for the blessings . Have a wonderful day. Soup mail coming soon. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

November 25, 2025 at 4:03 PM

Thank you for the visit and your comment, Darlene. Sending blessings your way my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

November 22, 2025 at 9:43 AM

Very nice!

Zyrool Gifford

November 23, 2025 at 1:21 AM

Thank you so much for the read and your kind words, Kim. Much appreciated. Sending blessings and wishing you a wonderful day, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 21, 2025 at 2:58 PM

Hello Zyrool ,seagulls always follows the ship for some reason. When on a picnic they are there to. Hugs. your Friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 22, 2025 at 10:43 AM

Hello Zyrool, Your welcome. i did enjoy this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

June 21, 2025 at 11:51 PM

Hello Darlene, thank you for the read. Yes they are. Enjoy your day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

June 8, 2025 at 12:46 PM

So pictureque, Flowing with simple imagery, in language, we comrehend. Thank you, Pangie

Zyrool Gifford

June 9, 2025 at 6:36 AM

Hello Pangie, thank you so much for the invite, means a lot. Have a wonderful new week ahead my new friend.

Susan Ashley

June 8, 2025 at 11:16 AM

Dear Zyrool, I adore the ocean and I adore your beautiful haiku that captures the serene moments by the waters edge with poetic finesse. Love every line! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Zyrool Gifford

June 9, 2025 at 6:40 AM

Hello Susan, thank you so much for your lovely words, they have lifted my spirits, my friend. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a wonderful new week ahead.

Kim Rodrigues

May 21, 2025 at 9:00 AM

Lovely!

Zyrool Gifford

May 30, 2025 at 9:15 AM

Thank you for the read, Kim.

Paul Marc

May 23, 2025 at 9:23 AM

The same word came to my mind as well :)

Margaret Foster

May 20, 2025 at 6:04 PM

A beautiful haiku. I can almost smell the ozone.. thank you for your comments on my posts. take care.

Zyrool Gifford

May 30, 2025 at 9:17 AM

Hello Margaret, thank you for the read, sorry for the delay, never got a notification. Have a wonderful weekend, fellow poet.

Ink Empress

May 17, 2025 at 10:16 PM

How pretty and beautiful! Absolutely love your haiku! Especially shoreline shaper is brilliant line to end this with! Well written and delivered! Gorgeous! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford

May 18, 2025 at 2:12 PM

Thank you for your beautiful words and support Ink.means a lot. Sending Blessings your way. Have a peaceful Sunday my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

May 17, 2025 at 9:17 PM

This poem has a real feel of the ocean. I like the sounds and hums at the shore

Zyrool Gifford

May 18, 2025 at 2:14 PM

Thank you for the read and your lovely words,Hilda. Wishing you a Blessed Sunday my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

May 16, 2025 at 11:33 PM

That middle line is just so beautiful

Zyrool Gifford

May 17, 2025 at 3:21 AM

Hello Andrea thank you so much for your kind words, means so much. Wishing you a wonderful weekend my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

May 15, 2025 at 9:21 AM

great alliteration and imagery.

Zyrool Gifford

May 15, 2025 at 9:58 AM

Thank you so much Victor, your support is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day my friend.

Zyrool Gifford

May 15, 2025 at 9:45 AM

Thank you so much Victor, your support is greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day my friend.

Paige Hind

May 14, 2025 at 9:34 AM

A beautiful ocean image- enjoyed

Zyrool Gifford

May 14, 2025 at 10:08 AM

Hello Paige, thank you for the read. So pleased you enjoyed it. Have a beautiful rest of the week, my poet friend.

Anne Winter

May 14, 2025 at 8:05 AM

Dear Zyrool, your haiku transports me to the coast! I can almost hear the seagulls and feel the ocean breeze. Beautifully written! Brilliant! Best,Anne

Zyrool Gifford

May 14, 2025 at 10:07 AM

Hello Anne, thank you for your lovely words, means a lot. Wishing you a fabulous day, fellow poet.