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Haiku Number Three

Rose bud cupped and moist
Showered at dawn with summer dew
Releasing love scent

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Sean Kelly

January 22, 2010 at 11:42 AM

Where is number 2 , Coo-chi Coo ??? ...

Anthony Nutter

December 31, 2009 at 12:58 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 29, 2009 at 7:26 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Deirdre. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

James Fraser

December 28, 2009 at 3:39 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James

December 27, 2009 at 1:23 PM

Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 3, 2009 at 1:44 PM

That was sweet. Vince

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2009 at 2:43 PM

ooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuu lalala You go girl! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Michael Degenhardt

January 16, 2009 at 4:57 AM

Love the imagery here and the tone is gentle and soft,while the words seem to flow so naturally. If I may? Remove "at" in the 2nd line to keep the format but otherwise a terrific write. Michael