Haiku Number Three

Rose bud cupped and moist
Showered at dawn with summer dew
Releasing love scent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/22/2010 11:42:00 AM
Where is number 2 , Coo-chi Coo ??? ...
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Date: 12/31/2009 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Deirdre. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 12/27/2009 1:23:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/3/2009 1:44:00 PM
That was sweet. Vince
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Date: 1/16/2009 2:43:00 PM
ooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuu lalala You go girl! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:57:00 AM
Love the imagery here and the tone is gentle and soft,while the words seem to flow so naturally. If I may? Remove "at" in the 2nd line to keep the format but otherwise a terrific write. Michael
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Date: 1/11/2009 7:52:00 AM
Lovely word choices... a delightful HAIKU Deirdre! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/8/2009 3:02:00 AM
What a beautiful and heady poem, well done haiku, love, Kristin
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Date: 1/7/2009 10:40:00 PM
Nice work Deirdre, cupped and moist, great wording...Raul
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Date: 1/7/2009 5:28:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this concise poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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