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Gull floats on ocean Gully below streams the line Gullible we can 23rd September 2016 5-7-5 howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 9/27/2016 12:22:00 PM
This is nice... gullible in "Farsi"Persian language means " Haloo" and this is my Pen-name, my nom de plume. So, if I want to name your piece, I'll call it " Credulous".
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:14:00 PM
Hi, Kai. I really like the first line. Gulls do look a lot like they are floating along. I love those birds!
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