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the arctic tundra
ravenous wolves surround moose
horrific death comes



For no title haiku contest sponsor Mick Talbot

Written 16th April 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 7:41 AM
The stronger subdue the weaker! In the animal kingdom it is a question of survival. But among humans it is part of their selfishness. Great haiku, Tom ! Have a great weekend !
Cunningham Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:17 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 1:40 AM
Thank you very much Susan. Tom.
Pett Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Tom, wolves are fascinating animals, great Haiku. :))
Cunningham Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Thank you very much Roy, indeed they are. Tom.
Murray Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Wow! A scary one for a change. Nature can be cruel Tom. Congratulations.
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Jean, It can indeed, but I done another called lucky escape, It made my day. Tom
Callus Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:47 PM
You present a very vivid picture, Tom. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Thank you very much Paul, sadly nature can be cruel and brutal at times, I saw that on a wildlife program and I always think why can't the camera crew do something but then they are not always there . Tom.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Delighted to see this on the list! Congratulations Tom :) xomo!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:58 PM
A northern girl I am somewhat biased in your favor ;)
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Maureen, after seeing the other entries I am surprised, I was up against some stiff competition. Tom.
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:21 AM
survival of the fittest Tom but i love to watch the programmes where they do escape, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Jan, check out a lucky escape that will make you smile. Like winter here again, heatings on again. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thanks very much Sunshine, It must be a real headache judging these, saw some amazing entries. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Thank you line, I must be doing something right. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:00 AM
Nature can be so cruel, Tom!!
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Thanks Andrea, the side of nature that no one wants to see. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Tremendous Haiku dear , Tom! Brute truth!
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Thank you Demetrios, sad to see but the laws of the jungle seem to apply. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Far better fate than a trophy hunter's wall. Expressive Haiku Tom, real life, real drama, no sport. ;) xomo!
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Thanks Maureen, At least in nature they sometimes get away not so with a hunter with a high powered rifle. Tom.
Williams Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:57 AM
A very strong Haiku Tom, depicting brutality in wild life and the inclement elements. All the best in the contest...Maria :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Maria, I know predators' have to survive too but I love to see them lose occasionally. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:29 AM
- A strong survival instinct ... the strongest wins - A powerful haiku, Tom - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Sunshine, its sad to see but even wolves have to eat I suppose. Tom.
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