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Haiku Musical

Donald O’Conner And Gene Kelly are out Singing in the rain

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Rascal Jones

Date: 10/5/2011 7:10:00 AM

Ah! Such talent as these two together will never be equalled. Correct title: "Singin' In The Rain" is a classic movie for all time...love it more with each viewing. Now, to your "Senryu". Haiku is all about nature only and Senryu is all about things human only. Each line must stand alone as a statement, with no enjambment, and the proper count is 5/7/5 (line-2 is 6-count), with no capitals, nor a title. Having said all that, don't look at mine for pure correctness either (LOL), and I loved yours, Tony! Thanks for sharing! Rascal

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 6:29:00 AM

Ha! Love that movie. Watched it over and over and over...lol CR

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 10:03:00 PM

oops, meant to say dancer there. I googled the name to make sure it was two dancers in case this was a joky haiku or something! You must love musicals. I used to watch those old ones they showed as reruns thru the 60's.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 10:02:00 PM

I only knew of Gene Kelly, not the other guy. I googled him to be sure he was a dance! Good one, Tony.