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Haiku Minus One

a season come and gone
mistaken thoughts and writing...
goodbye my haiku
9th Place Winner P.D. Linda's "Any Poem This Week" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/10/2012 9:34:00 AM
Congradulations! What an honor! Bless you,Avis
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Date: 2/9/2012 7:42:00 AM
Enjoyable haiku! Continue on with your verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carol! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 6:31:00 PM
this is really clever, Carol. I like it MUCHLY
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest......... George
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:47:00 AM
Thank you P.D and everyone for your words on this poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:34:00 PM
Carol, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD
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Date: 2/6/2012 6:40:00 PM
Hello Carol,, I very much enjoyed this haiku ;},, have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 2/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
congrats Carol on a marvelous win for this incredible write luv.. hope u are fine.. and will return soon...
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:57:00 AM
Carol congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carol, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:17:00 AM
Congratulation on your win, loved, bl
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:12:00 AM
Congrats Carol, a fascinating writing! :)
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:39:00 AM
aww... so sad. Please don't stop writing! congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations Carol x
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Not really sure about the interpertation so it is a very good one..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:42:00 PM
come back soon Carol. we need you! harry
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Date: 2/4/2012 9:19:00 AM
Truthfully I say. I mistake many times. Thanks for your inspiration got from this wonderful haiku. loved, bl
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:59:00 AM
This reminds me of dark chocolate (Belgian, of course ;-) ): initially it registers as bitter on your tongue but the longer it stays, the happier you are that it did. :-)
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:03:00 AM
When most poets write, they tend to look to the 'complex', trying to give their writing that 'wow' effect. That is a mistake that you didn't fall into. I write a lot of Haiku's and have fallen into that trap many times. I view this work as a way to describe 'writers block' (which we have all had), but you did it in a simple way. That was the brilliance of this write. To write a Haiku about a complex subject and do it in a simple way, takes mad talent and you have it. Excellent write. S.R
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Date: 2/3/2012 12:04:00 PM
This is nice. I stopped writing poetry long ago coz it is ' mistaken writing' but you just continue writing the sweet haikus, please don't stop
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Date: 2/3/2012 11:47:00 AM
Smile ˜ And good riddens too! Thanks for the visit & you take care of youreself ˜ Love, John!:) *
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