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Haiku Minus One

a season come and gone
mistaken thoughts and writing...
goodbye my haiku



9th Place Winner
P.D. Linda's "Any Poem This Week" contest

on writing and wordshaiku

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Avis Bailey

February 10, 2012 at 9:34 AM

Congradulations! What an honor! Bless you,Avis

Matthew Anish

February 9, 2012 at 7:42 AM

Enjoyable haiku! Continue on with your verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kim Merryman

February 7, 2012 at 8:05 PM

Congrats on your win, Carol! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2012 at 6:31 PM

this is really clever, Carol. I like it MUCHLY

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2012 at 12:36 PM

Congrats on your win with this creative work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

George Aul

February 7, 2012 at 12:01 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest......... George

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 7, 2012 at 11:47 AM

Thank you P.D and everyone for your words on this poem. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

February 6, 2012 at 9:34 PM

Carol, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

Debbie Duncan

February 6, 2012 at 6:40 PM

Hello Carol,, I very much enjoyed this haiku ;},, have a blessed day ;}

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 6, 2012 at 6:00 PM

congrats Carol on a marvelous win for this incredible write luv.. hope u are fine.. and will return soon...

David Williams

February 6, 2012 at 11:57 AM

Carol congrats on your win..David

Lizanne Scholtz

February 6, 2012 at 10:55 AM

Congratulations on your win Carol, love Elizabeth

Bl Devnath

February 6, 2012 at 9:17 AM

Congratulation on your win, loved, bl

Dinda Minardi

February 6, 2012 at 9:12 AM

Congrats Carol, a fascinating writing! :)

Christopher Bunton

February 6, 2012 at 8:58 AM

Congratulations!

Black Eyed Susan

February 6, 2012 at 8:39 AM

aww... so sad. Please don't stop writing! congrats on your win!

Bob Quigley

February 6, 2012 at 7:50 AM

Congrats on your win Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 6, 2012 at 4:55 AM

Congratulations Carol x

Sara Kendrick

February 5, 2012 at 3:53 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Not really sure about the interpertation so it is a very good one..Sara

Harry Horsman

February 4, 2012 at 2:42 PM

come back soon Carol. we need you! harry

Bl Devnath

February 4, 2012 at 9:19 AM

Truthfully I say. I mistake many times. Thanks for your inspiration got from this wonderful haiku. loved, bl

Darryl Davis

February 4, 2012 at 1:59 AM

This reminds me of dark chocolate (Belgian, of course ;-) ): initially it registers as bitter on your tongue but the longer it stays, the happier you are that it did. :-)

Samual Ronthorpe

February 4, 2012 at 1:03 AM

When most poets write, they tend to look to the 'complex', trying to give their writing that 'wow' effect. That is a mistake that you didn't fall into. I write a lot of Haiku's and have fallen into that trap many times. I view this work as a way to describe 'writers block' (which we have all had), but you did it in a simple way. That was the brilliance of this write. To write a Haiku about a complex subject and do it in a simple way, takes mad talent and you have it. Excellent write. S.R