Haiku - Mindless Brook

water wanders slips
over and down rocks aimlessly-
finding its way home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:59 AM
Excellent haiku! Enjoyed.
Gaul Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Susan, thanks for your remarks and noticing.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:37 PM
A most lovely haiku! Well done, my friend! Best regards. Pandita
Gaul Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thanks so much for your comment. I was afraid it was a bit too cleverish for the pure haiku lovers. But I'll take any affirmation, delighted to accept yours.
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