Deirdre Omaidin Poet Light Verse

Haiku - Lucky Escapes - Number Twenty Two

Leveret scurries
Trained ears, panoramic sight
Saved - by a hare's breath.


Easter Bunny blinks
Burrows the deep undergrowth
Close shave this morning

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Debbie Guzzi July 31, 2009 at 1:44 PM LOL gotta love those bunnies!!! Light & Love

Raul Moreno April 1, 2009 at 1:32 AM Nice double haiku, Nice muse...Raul

Trudy Diane Rider March 31, 2009 at 1:03 PM Deirdre, what a magical poem, just loverly! ~Trudy~

Carolyn Devonshire March 29, 2009 at 9:16 AM A delightful image in this great double haiku, Deirdre!!! (I'm glad the Easter Bunny got away!)

Sean Kelly March 25, 2009 at 3:45 AM A double posting , from the Haiku-Queen ... And a very cleverly linked presentation , it certainly is ....

L'Nass Shango March 24, 2009 at 7:18 AM The dramatic ending of the Haiku is under the genius of your mastery. Dear Deirdre, I write your name because it too is poetry. Continue to shine upon your gift. Love

Lena Townsend March 24, 2009 at 6:10 AM This is so well written. Great imagery! I have such a vivid picture of this furry little creature in my mind. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P. March 24, 2009 at 4:31 AM ooo! this is lovely my friend! you are so brilliant at this!! loved it... the only picture and the title... ~ Arany