Constance La France Poet Haiku

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Haiku- Hummingbirds

in a deep forest
hummingbirds find a flower-
     silent fluttering

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March 31, 2016

Poetry/Haiku/hummingbirds
Copyright Protected, ID 16-773- 544-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Any Poem
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Sixth Place
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Poem of the Day- April 2, 2016

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Jeremy Proehl June 3, 2016 at 5:06 AM Hi Broken Wing. What a nice Haiku. I just saw a hummingbird drink water midair that was dripping off the roof. Amazing birds. Thank you for painting such a nice word picture. JP

Angeline Haikutwinkle April 4, 2016 at 10:24 PM Hummingbirds are wonderful creatures. A definite 7 rating Constance La France April 5, 2016 at 3:05 AM Angel, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the 7 !!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2016 at 7:43 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. B.W. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 1:42 PM Anne Lise, thanks so much for the congrats and hugs ~

Moon Flower April 3, 2016 at 1:55 AM Congrats for being the poem of the day! :) Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 1:46 PM Moon, thanks so much for the congrats ~

Vladislav Raven April 2, 2016 at 10:43 PM Hi Constance, dropping by with my congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved with this wonderful Haiku. Hugs....Vlad. Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 12:21 AM Vlad, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful and hugs ~

Cindi Rockwell April 2, 2016 at 9:41 PM Congrats on POTD Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 12:22 AM Cindi, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2016 at 7:10 PM If a tree falls in a forest and no one is there does it make a sound?..I like your line of thought on this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 12:23 AM Sara, thanks for visiting, appreciate ~

Tim Smith April 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM Very lovely haiku Constance... Congratulations on POTD. Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 12:23 AM Tim, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations !!

Brian Davey April 2, 2016 at 1:39 PM Congrats on a beautiful POD Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 5:16 PM Brain thanks for visiting with the congrats and beautiful ~

Eve Roper April 2, 2016 at 1:05 PM Wow!!! a perfect haiku, BW, congratulations on Poem Of The Day!!!!!! Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 1:09 PM Eve, thanks for the wow and the congrats !

Paul Callus April 2, 2016 at 9:05 AM Big congratulations on your placement in the contest and POTD, Constance!!! Humming all the way:) It's a victory for perseverance!! ~ Warm regards ~ paul Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 11:54 AM Paul, thank you so much for the congratulations on the comment, so appreciated !!

Verlena S. Walker April 2, 2016 at 8:39 AM Beautiful Broken Wings... Verlena Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 11:55 AM Verlena, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !!!

Charlie Smith April 2, 2016 at 7:54 AM Congrats on POTD B/W, good job... Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 11:55 AM Charlie, thanks for the congrats

Casarah Nance April 2, 2016 at 7:18 AM Beautiful , I love hummingbirds :) Grats on peom of the day Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 11:56 AM Casarah, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congrats !

Jan Allison April 2, 2016 at 6:30 AM Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 11:57 AM Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs !

Lenny Gazbowski April 1, 2016 at 8:31 PM Congrats on your win ! Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 8:43 PM Lenny, thanks for visiting with congrats !

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty April 1, 2016 at 1:27 PM This hummingbird is you Constance. Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 7:46 PM Rajat, then that would make me beautiful, thank you for the compliment !

Vladislav Raven April 1, 2016 at 9:32 AM Hi Constance, a beautiful Haiku. Your words paint the vision. This Haiku goes into my faves. This has to be a seven. An excellent write....Mike. Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 7:51 PM Mike, thanks for the beautiful and the excellent, I love those words and for the fav and 7 ~

Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 2:57 AM many congrats on your win Broken Wings:-) hugs jan xx Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 7:59 PM Jan, thanks for visiting with the congrats and hugs !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Broken.. Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 8:07 PM Upma, thanks for the congrats and superb and lovely, just love those words !

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2016 at 12:40 AM Hey, how neat. One of your hummingbird haiku placed with a nice win on PD's list. congrats, Constance Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 8:08 PM Andrea, thanks for the congrats, finally my hummingbird got a placement !!!!!

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2016 at 11:58 PM Broken Wings, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 8:09 PM Linda, thank you for a great contest and for my great placement, so honored to be on your list ~!

Daver Austin March 31, 2016 at 12:33 PM Yes. Isn't it interesting how they whir those wings without making any noise, and such a tiny bird. Love, daver Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 3:28 PM Dave thanks for visiting my poem today with the love. ..

Jan Allison March 31, 2016 at 11:25 AM wonderful imagery BW good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 3:29 PM Jan thanks for visiting my poem with the wonderful and hugs ...

Charmaine Chircop March 31, 2016 at 10:33 AM Beautiful Haiku Constance! Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 3:27 PM Charmaine thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful. ...