haiku : hiku : crow

  haiku

crow polishes beak shine
morning dew fresh washes window ~
gorgonzola sky

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hiku 

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              oooooo
                            rrrrrrrrrr
             CC                                      crow
                                                        CROW
                        polishes 

                   b   /\              
                        \/         ea K             SHINE

       m o r n                         w              “””””””
                                                              ………:::
            i  n G           de    
                                           fresh
                                        \ washes /
                                          \          /    ,,,,,||||“”””””::::::—.          |||  ||||

                              
 WIN                                  - |         |-
                      DOW          -  |         | -

gor                                       Zola           
                                                                  KY    ^^^
                       ^^^^^^^^
               Gon                   “”” ***.             *****^^^^
                                             ***         S    *****^^^^^   
                                                                               @……,,,,,||||“”””””::::::—        “””””””
@@                                       /\/\/\
                                    /\                /\
                                          SK
                                ~         Y          ~ 
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mysore Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 6:44 PM
There is so much effort in this, lovely write dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
Daniels Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 8:28 PM
ThkU for pop-in & comment, Thriveni. Best cheers to U 2. Xxx.
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations Ghairo! :)
Daniels Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 8:59 AM
THANKYOU for read. Starting to enjoy this form. Blessings from the South. X
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