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Haiku - Grey Forest Predators

ravenous wolf pack  
winter has robbed them of food ---
howling in chorus  







Written on October 26th 2018
For haiku-senryu- Writing challenge
Sponsor Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Horsman Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 10:14 PM
This different from you, Tom, enjoyed the read. Harry
Cunningham Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 10:58 PM
Thank you very much Harry, hope you are doing OK. Tom
Raven Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Hi Tom, this is such a wonderful Haiku my friend. I do love wolves and I love the content of this excellent write. Have a wonderful end to your Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:37 AM
Thank you Mike, I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 6:36 AM
It’s the coyotes for us! Yikes!
Cunningham Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:12 AM
They are a cousin of the grey wolves, hope they don't give you problems. Tom.
Proxenos Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 1:11 AM
You seem to be a regular winner of competitions Tom. My heartiest congratulations - A verse written with great compassion. Kind regards, Jennifer
Cunningham Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Thanks Jennifer, I seem to do ok with the haiku form but other forms don't seem to catch the eye of some sponsors' who have their own tastes, but a contest gets you thinking. Tom.
La France Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Thank you very much D.H. , its a form I'd never heard of until I joined soup a year ago next month. Thank you for hosting. Tom.
Doll Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Unique haiku , Tom. Congratulations on your first place win. Well reserved. All the best ~Warren
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Thank you very much for the congrats Warren . Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Amazing haiku, my friend. And I see congratulations are in order. Well done, Tom! Hugs, Carolyn
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn, much appreciated. Tom.
Messina Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 9:39 AM
You are a master at haiku's, Tom. Congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Thank you Charlie, much appreciated. Tom.
Palli Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Great one! Congrats!
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Thank you very much Susan. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 9:04 PM
A-oooo! Congratulations from one of the pack. ~ Gershon WOLF
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:16 AM
Maybe subconsciously you inspired me lol.Thanks. Tom.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 5:34 PM
The words truly paint that picture. Congrats on the win.
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:15 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, Tom.
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Back with deserved congratulations, Tom! Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Thank you very much Paul. Tom.
Awtry Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Thank you P.S. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 3:11 PM
- Congratulations on your great Haiku win, Tom :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thank you Sunshine, I hope you have fab weekend too. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 6:46 AM
Marvelous Haiku dearest, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Demetrios, happy you liked it. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Awesome haiku, nicely done, good luck in the contest
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Thank you very much Tania, glad you enjoyed it. Tom.
Mcguire Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:00 AM
Nice Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:15 AM
Thanks Timothy. Tom.
Dutta Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 12:17 AM
VERY GOOD. All the best.
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:14 AM
Thank you very much Anisha. Tom.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Wow, what an impact in these wonderful haiku you have painted, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:13 AM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
Salehi Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 6:32 PM
At least they have one another... nicely done.
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Thank you very much Pashang. Tom.
One Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:47 PM
I am sure they will find something to prey on.. Great imagery in you ku...
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you S.O., even a mouse wouldn't go amiss when food is scarce lol. Tom.
Callus Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:33 PM
A true to life image, Tom. Luckily they are equipped to cope with the situation...I would have starved to death! Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Thanks Paul, yes me too, nothing worse than feeling peckish, and then trying to catch your dinner. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 1:49 PM
- Their howls is about emotions and stress ... without food a lot of stress, Tom - Excellent written - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine, nothing worse than being hungry for sure . Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Great imagery, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank you line. Tom. P.S. Sorted.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:59 AM
You captured that photo expertly in your write..a well written haiku Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Vijay, I wrote it first then added the picture after googling it, it was sheer luck it fitted the hakiu like a glove. Tom.
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