Haiku For Raul

Liquid lasers cut
moist verdant patterns into
refuge for the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 18, 2009 at 8:15 PM
Love this haiku, Gerard! Each word is integral and paints a vivid, lovely picture. Hugs, Donna
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October 17, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Super Haiku Gerard >> James
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 5:57 PM
Lovely poem for Raul's contest!! :) Carrie
Owens Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:51 AM
I enjoyed reading. Marty
Moreno Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:14 AM
Gerard, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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October 8, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Interesting take on the picture. Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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