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Haiku: Fish 2


solitary night
A little, big fish drinking
betrayed by the hook


By Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

May 7, 2024 at 5:20 PM

Ahh!! Poor fish. I wonder if he was eaten by those who were using the hook. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford

May 7, 2024 at 7:15 PM

Let’s hope so, Sara. Thank you for reading my work. Enjoy your day.

Lynn D.

May 5, 2024 at 11:22 AM

You should keep going with it! Excellent start!

Zyrool Gifford

May 5, 2024 at 12:20 PM

Thank you so much Lynn, it means a lot. Have wonderful Sunday.

Silent One

May 2, 2024 at 10:03 AM

You weaved this together really well..

Zyrool Gifford

May 2, 2024 at 1:06 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Silent my friend. Enjoy your day/night.

Jerry Brotherton

May 1, 2024 at 5:05 AM

Wonderful imagery, Zyrool. Nice haiku, my friend.

Zyrool Gifford

May 1, 2024 at 7:53 AM

Thank you my friend. Your comments always gives me a boost. Have a great day, Jerry.

Bill Baker

April 29, 2024 at 6:27 PM

Nice Haiku, Zyrool, bad ending for the fish. :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Zyrool Gifford

April 30, 2024 at 9:06 AM

Thank you for your support, my friend, reality isn’t always nice. Have fabulous day Bill.

Hilda Greenhough

April 29, 2024 at 4:46 PM

Somewhat sad, but an excellent haiku. May the saving grace be that the little fish was tasty.

Zyrool Gifford

April 30, 2024 at 9:10 AM

Thank you for the read, Hilda. Your words give a boost to my writing. Sending Blessings your way.

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