Haiku Desire

what i really want to do
     is write a haiku
that will truly impress you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Love the humor. It really impresses me. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:55 PM
You did! The one you need to impress is Raul..the Haiku king. BG
Moreno Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:34 PM
Nice monorhyme in haiku...Raul
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