Haiku Days

Haiku Days Haiku mornings coffee and my computer and quiet in the house. Haiku nights red wine and my computer and quiet in the house. My small world in seventeen syllables

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 1:18:00 AM

Stopping by for old time's sake... Jack, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/27/2013 8:46:00 AM

Linda, A happy Thanksgiving to you as well. Your words are very kind. As I've said before, your support for my meager writing has been there since day-one, and I've appreciated it immensely. I enjoy your always good, sometimes wicked humor, not to mention your skill with words, which I very much admire. You're a good person to know... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 9:00:00 AM

syllables --not line...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 8:55:00 AM

Good morning Jack, this is a fascinating way in sharing your day's and night in just 17 lines. Amazing it is.. I wonder what my haiku day's and night would sound like... This would make a great idea for a contest.... enjoyed... Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 9:41:00 AM

Why don't you give it a try. Just for fun, you might look at http://roadrunnerhaikublog.files.wordpress.com/2013/08/rr-13-2.pdf. Scroll down to one beginning "Moist clods."

Donna Jones

Date: 8/12/2013 6:42:00 PM

Hi Jack....enjoyed your poem...sometimes I wish I had more time to be online...but then again I'm glad I'm still able to and have lots and lots of things to keep me busy and active. Love your new picture!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/12/2013 8:37:00 PM

It's good to hear from you, and that life seems to be going well for you. I thought it was time to not look so gruff... Jack

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/11/2013 4:22:00 PM

I like my coffee in the mornings, but the wine should taste great at night, but not if you have to drink it alone. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla