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Haiku- Childhood Memory

childhood memory in a country field of gold- birds chase me away childhood memory of lush emerald green ferns- frogs leap and I run childhood memory of sweet coolness in the woods- flies chase me away childhood memory and fields of yellow daisies- bees buzzing wildly childhood memory of soft pink roses blooming- a thorn makes me bleed childhood memory of tall wild flowers swaying- they tickle my legs childhood memory of gathering the fall leaves- a chipmunk runs by childhood memory nature lovely to recall- birds tweet as I write _________________________ July 19, 2019 Poetry/Haiku/childhood memory Copyright Protected, ID 19-1167-493-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Multiple - Haikus sponsor, Jamie Pan Second Place
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Vangaveti Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 9:34 AM
Beautiful childhood memories - vivid and wonderful :) Hugs//
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thank you Swetha
Agustin Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Wow! Congrats. Vivid childhood memories... Relived! God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Beata
Ravidas Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Great silver. J'aime and fave.
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Kurt thanks for the Fav
Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 6:44 AM
What a great and excellent poem!
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:33 PM
JW thanks for the excellent
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 7:00 AM
This was absolutely stunning Constance. Wow! A winner in every way!
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Thank you
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 1:48 AM
I loved every one of these Constance! They are brilliantly written! I really hope these come in First Place as they are deserving of the honor! Into my Faves! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Connie thank you for the compliment and the fav
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:21 PM
I just love the way you repeated your lines for each one. You came up with a really good way to take that challenge, Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Thanks for the compliment
One Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 5:31 AM
Brilliant collection of haiku... so nostalgic...
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Thank you
Cunningham Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 4:31 AM
An outdoor girl, no better place to grow up Constance. Good luck. Tom
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for the visit Tom
Poetry Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 2:29 AM
Beaucoup of marvelous haiKus which even inspire me, interectation salute alkas
La France Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Thank you Alkas
Mcgee Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 7:13 PM
I am in love with your childhood...you spent a lot of time outside and I can really picture that. Good luck in the contest...I think this is a winner!
Mcgee Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Congratulations on the sliver! Wow. I love it more after a 2nd reading...a fav!
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