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Haiku Candle

haiku candle, its steam crafted of purple lotus and gold — i tipple its loose leaf it’s jasmine green tea a lift of inner esprit i cling to its handle drunk from its light jasmine under my nose its green scent cozy wooziness evades weariness fades haikus invade my Lay-Z-Boy island sushi-free in my teal sea stretched wall to wall 3/17/2021

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Date: 3/18/2021 5:56:00 AM
- Awe ... so beautifully described ... lifts my inner esprit, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2021 5:53:00 AM
Very nice and relaxing Kim :)
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:24:00 PM
This is extremely lovely, Kim. It is so pleasant and peaceful. It's in my faves. :=)
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Date: 3/17/2021 6:17:00 PM
Beautiful job Kim. Delicate and pretty. I am enjoying this from my LazyBoy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:18:00 PM
Yay! Clap clap clap! Thank you :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:18:00 PM
Yay! Clap clap clap! Thank you :)
Date: 3/17/2021 11:35:00 AM
What a lovely, soft poem!\
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 3/17/2021 10:11:00 AM
Images following images. All so well described.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 3/17/2021 10:04:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is just lovely! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:18:00 PM
Thank you! You too!
Date: 3/17/2021 8:01:00 AM
Love this! God bless you with love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear friend!

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