Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Haiku Candle

haiku candle, its steam
    crafted of purple lotus and gold —
         i tipple its loose leaf

         it’s jasmine green tea
      a lift of inner esprit
   i cling to its handle
drunk from its light

jasmine under my nose
   its green scent
        cozy

         wooziness evades
      weariness fades
   haikus invade
my Lay-Z-Boy island

         sushi-free
     in my teal sea
stretched wall to wall

3/17/2021

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2021 at 5:56 AM - Awe ... so beautifully described ... lifts my inner esprit, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands March 18, 2021 at 5:53 AM Very nice and relaxing Kim :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 17, 2021 at 8:24 PM This is extremely lovely, Kim. It is so pleasant and peaceful. It's in my faves. :=)

Caren Krutsinger March 17, 2021 at 6:17 PM Beautiful job Kim. Delicate and pretty. I am enjoying this from my LazyBoy. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Yay! Clap clap clap! Thank you :) Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Yay! Clap clap clap! Thank you :)

Ann Peck March 17, 2021 at 11:35 AM What a lovely, soft poem!\ Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thank you, Ann!

Victor Buhagiar March 17, 2021 at 10:11 AM Images following images. All so well described. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thank you, Victor!

Alexis Y. March 17, 2021 at 10:04 AM Hi Kim, This is just lovely! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thank you! You too!

Regina Mcintosh March 17, 2021 at 8:01 AM Love this! God bless you with love, Gina Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 9:00 AM Thanks so much, dear friend!