Haiku Beyond - Nature Only

HAIKU    BEYOND  ( NATURE ONLY )



Whirled stars cold night light,
It is out of this world  -  oh,
Eyes gaze o’er the chasm.


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( Written for the contest of Rick  Parise )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Keenly observed and read, the picture of the contest, Sydney
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 11:47 AM
It does appear to be a type of chasm, Syd. Very interesting interpretation of the picture. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, carolyn
La France Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Very nice Sydney, best of luck in the contest~~
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:17 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sydney. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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