Seren Roberts Poet Haiku

Haiku and Questionku Contest

LOVES TEARS

love is in the air
clouds like billowing hearts...
lightening hits target


LOVE CALLS

noise of loud thunder
drowning out all reasoning....
body answers call

LOVES NEEDS FULFILLED

loves seed planted
well watered will grow....
Is wedding ring needed?

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Joseph May February 17, 2013 at 12:31 PM congrats on a wonderful win Seren

Len Gasun February 16, 2013 at 11:39 PM Big congratulations my dear friend Seren for your amazing chain of haiky poem and fanastic win! I enjoyed reading reading them! A great write indeed ! love/hugs, Leonora

Francine Roberts February 16, 2013 at 11:17 PM many congrats on your win in the contest Seren with this wonderful set of Haikus

Audrey Haick February 16, 2013 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on your very fine win, Seren! Seren Roberts February 16, 2013 at 5:08 PM Thank you Annalise.....Seren

Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2013 at 1:57 PM SEREN, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA Seren Roberts February 16, 2013 at 3:24 PM My pleasure Linda , i think its polite to enter a contest if someone has taken the trouble to run one. Thank you ......Seren

Wayland Bunch January 30, 2013 at 12:09 AM Wow, these are really good. I really like all of them. I can just keep reading and reading them, they are very powerful. Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 6:49 AM Thank you Wayland, I see you have been reading most of them...Seren

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2013 at 11:48 PM oooh, great metaphorical series!! I enjoyed these. Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 6:48 AM Thanks Andrea...Seren

Vicky Tsiluma January 29, 2013 at 10:38 PM Hi Seren, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the forms superbly. I love the way you’ve started at the beginning of love and shown its progression, and alluded to the question of marriage - excellent. I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky. Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 10:42 PM Thanks so much Vicky .....Seren

Russell Sivey January 28, 2013 at 10:14 PM These are brilliantly written Haiku and Questionku! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a splendid piece, Great Work!!