Haiku and Questionku

Red lips awaiting 
natures  call to relieve stress....
Showered with loves rain


Birds and bees watching
as bodies writhe in passion....
seeds of love planted


New buds are forming
love of nature fulfilled....
Did the earth move for you too?

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Date: 2/27/2013 5:38:00 AM
I love haiku, and I've got some of mine too, but none as complete as this. I'm impressed and inspired by this outstanding piece.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 5:39:00 PM
to be honest I am crap at it, its a hit and miss with me, a few friends on here have advised me, but some have given up cos I find it so hard. there is a site called daily haiku may I suggest you look and read it daily it does help/...Seren
Date: 1/30/2013 12:11:00 AM
You are really good with the haiku, these are really powerful as well. I really enjoyed all six of them. Thank you for sharing. I know you will do great in the contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thank you once again..seren
Date: 1/29/2013 11:47:00 PM
my favorite was the questionku. It was a really neat tie up to this series!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I was wondering...Seren
Date: 1/29/2013 2:41:00 PM
Seren a wonderful Haiku. Il loved the question at the end. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/29/2013 3:33:00 PM
haha me too. thanks for stopping by...Seren
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