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[Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Rick Parise December 2024]

Haiku Allure

mid-summer mountain -
exploring the enticement  
of her lush contours

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naturehaiku

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Moon Harp

January 1, 2025 at 9:06 AM

This is beautiful, Paul. And well crafted, too.

Paul Callus

January 9, 2025 at 9:01 AM

Thank you MH; pleased to have you stopping by. Been reading some of your poems, written in a unique style...impressed! ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

December 23, 2024 at 8:13 PM

A most visual and kinetic mood you painted here, paul...much enjoyed!

Paul Callus

December 26, 2024 at 2:04 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Nette. Hope you enjoy the transition from one year to another! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2024 at 11:01 PM

Ohhh wonderful!

Paul Callus

December 26, 2024 at 2:06 AM

I love your reaction, Andrea! Thank you :) Best regards // paul

JC Brul

December 9, 2024 at 3:23 PM

This is so spectacular, Paul! You give me a new perspective on how I see mountains not only during summer but in all seasons. I love how the execution is done like effortlessly but majestically!One of the best haikus I've read ever since! Definitely a fave for me! Stay creative!^__^

Paul Callus

December 27, 2024 at 1:48 PM

Thank you so very much, JcB; your lovely feedback and the fav are truly appreciated. ~ I've been reading some of your poems, and I must say I'm positively impressed. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

December 9, 2024 at 7:58 AM

A beauty, Paul! Congrats!

MD Johnson

December 9, 2024 at 12:20 AM

Congratulations on your placement. Indeed, the mountains are filled with romance—MDJ

Ink Empress

December 8, 2024 at 11:41 PM

This is so beautiful and clever! I love the last line the most how youv personified here, the mountains and described her contours is so very clever of you! Dear paul, youv nailed it as always, with such. Descriptive lines! Congratulations on your placement, sending you light

Karen Jones

December 8, 2024 at 11:27 PM

Congratulations on your win for a lovely haiku!

Paul Callus

January 9, 2025 at 9:14 AM

Thank you Karen. Best regards // paul

thriveni c mysore

December 8, 2024 at 7:51 PM

Sun exploring the Mountain's contours! haha. awesome write. Congratulations on your winning Haiku dear poet. Cheers!!!

Susan Ashley

December 6, 2024 at 6:13 PM

Dear Paul, your golden pen spills intoxicating beauty in brevity. Such an intimate, sensual haiku, allure indeed, both nature and human nature can be seductive. "mid-summer mountain" sets the attractive tone. This is a fav! So glad to see you! Your wonderful presence has been missed. I hope all is well with you and yours. Warmest wishes and hugs my dear friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

December 3, 2024 at 12:02 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write. A story in just 3 lines. Hooray!!! "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.............

Paul Callus

December 4, 2024 at 4:33 AM

Thank you so much Paula; I'm pleased you enjoyed reading. ~ I wish you all the very best for the festive season // paul

Tom Cunningham

December 2, 2024 at 8:49 PM

A stunning image Paul, something to look forward to as winter is on us. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Paul Callus

December 3, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Thanks for reading, liking and commenting, Tom! Life's commitments have not permitted me to be too active on Soup; hoping to make up for lost time ~ Regards // paul